Some of the questions below are rhetorical, others have answers, but it's not always clear which is which.
References are to figure numbers unless noted P for Page or T for Table.
EXHIBIT | COMMENTS |
1,2 |
V-axis should be from 0 to 20 in steps of 5 - abbreviated (0, 20, 5). The minor ticks are unnecessary, especially in a non-time axis. As always in a time series, the V-axis annotations (title and tick labels) could be to the right. Show either 9 minor H-axis minor ticks (one for each year) or none at all. The exhibit could use a clear title instead of the V-axis label. Wainer's own graphics appear to be drawn by hand, or at least to have a slightly crude look (note the odd placements of the markers on the lines). |
I.1 |
Note that this is one of the few examples of a pure S v T exhibit. Using one of Tufte's ideas, would the exhibit be improved by showing more than one 'cycle' e.g. 1½ days? Question: what does the slope of each line represent, and what would 45° signify? |
1.1 | This is an interesting early example of small ‘sketches’ in a document - why don't authors do this more often? |
1.4 | Before the Cartesian paradigm: values shown in the plot; how would you revise? |
1.5 |
Why break up by month? What do the horizontal lines signify? The grid is stronger than the plot. |
1.6 |
Time labels on right What of data between events? Is an area chart appropriate? |
1.7 |
The bars are ordered by "Today’s" population I would show Zt-38 above Zt0 – we read down and left add % change. |
P 23 | Why does the book need foot- and endnotes? |
T 4.1 | This is a nicely designed table; I might use dittos or lines to signify the span of the monarchs. |
4.1 |
How many dimensions of data? What’s the extent & resolution of time? Note that even 200 years ago ‘gradient’ was a temptation! |
4.2 | This datagraphic implies that measurements were made at the time events shown. |
4.3 | The gridlines (both styles) are distracting. |
4.4 |
The time axis is mislabeled - should be the same as in 4.3. The v-axis is too busy; (8, 16, 2) would be sufficient, without minor ticks. |
4.5 |
Why are the dots connected by what appears to be a spline? Would callouts (arrows + text boxes) be sufficient to indicate the events? |
P 33 | This is a nice graphical illustration of so-called 'spurious correlation.' The H-axis would be clearer with ticks and labels at 980 + 20 * (0, 6, 1). This is improved somewhat in 9.5. |
4.6 |
What of the linear interpolation? The contractions of the years on the H-axis isn't needed. |
4.7 | As with 4.2 a naive interpretation is that measurements were only made at the times of the labeled events - what of data at other times? |
4.8 |
Note the labels on axis 4, where we can interpret current values more easily. Why smooth the data? |
4.9 | What are the grid lines for? |
5.2 | This is a nice combination of T and S dimensions. 1¼ T cycles are shown. Although T is shown in the usual direction, because of Earth's sense of rotation S is therefore reversed. |
5.3 |
A pure T graphic (except for the labels). Study this graphic for awhile and realize that for T to increase to the right, events have to occur to the left! Think about this when making an animation. |
6.1 |
This horizontal bar chart enables the V labels to be oriented as read. The H labels could just as well be (0, 300, 20); note that the time scaling factor is implied in the last value. The bar symbology may have been made on an early Macintosh computer; something subtler would do. |
6.2 |
Another almost purely T datagraphic. The horizontal organization is always tricky: tstart, tend, or (tend - tstart)? The labels are near the data. It would be interesting to see a book containing the sketches of famous scientists! |
7.3 |
This is very hard to read but rewards study. Question What STP dimensions are shown here and on which axes? |
8.1 |
Finally, we look at some maps! How many variables do each of the symbol boxes illustrate? Pressure could more clearly be shown with contours. |
9.2 |
Using an ellipse to highlight a period is less clear than vertical line boundaries or a horizontal bold line. The V-axis could be (0.5, 2, .05). |
9.2 | The log scale should be clearly labeled as such, and the minor ticks don't have much meaning (they're at 300, 3000, etc). |
9.3 | Why are there 3 font sizes on the T-axis, and what do the 5-year ticks mean? |
9.5 |
A more sophisticated analysis would look at differences. What is the smooth curve model based on? |
15.3 | QuestionWhat are at least 3 insights illustrated here (don't click on the link until you've thought about it!)? |
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